Wednesday, June 4, 2008

Naura’s Night Adventure

Naura lived in Tamil Nadu, with his parents and his one brother and one sister. He has many toys like building blocks, cars, bikes etc. He used to play with his toys. His favorite was his crayon gun which he got for his ninth birthday. His family had their own garden. There were fruit trees in their garden like mango, guava, banana, cherry tree, and papaya, etc. They used to roam around the garden with their neighborhood friends. His friends loved to play there because they did not have a big garden like Naura’s family. Naura and his brother and sister were kind to their friends. So their parents allowed them to play in the garden with the friends. He had a dog in his house. Wherever Naura went, the dog followed him.

One night Naura thought “I will go and get the crayon gun and shoot the mangoes down”. So he called his sister and brother and told them his plan. So they agreed to pick mangoes from the ground in bags. Naura, his brother and sister had fun collecting mangoes with the dog running after them. It was difficult to carry the mangoes home. So they took their cart and put the bags in it and pushed it home. They went to sleep afterwards. When their mother came to the kitchen in the morning, she saw a basket full of mangoes. She was worried who put the mangoes in the basket. So she went and asked Naura. Naura told his mother about his night adventure. She was surprised yet happy. And she shared their night adventure with their father.



"I wrote this story when I was young"

6 comments:

Alexi George said...

Hi Nathan,
Great story. I'll look forward to reading more.

Anil Jacob said...

I really liked your story Nathan. I am really impressed on how you have transformed since the last time I saw you. May God be with you in all that you do.

Bless said...

Hey Nathan,

I would say kudos. Well written.. Looking forward for more.. Would you mind if I shared it with my nephew :) ??

You missed a word in the last paragraph. Just thought you would like to know.

God bless you dear and May He inspire you to write more

Blessy Jose

Savvy Mom said...

Hey Nathan,
Keep up the good work.
:)
and keep writing!

Unknown said...

Nice story....are you going to be posting more soon?

And you are still young, so it should be present tense :)
(wrf your comment "I wrote this story when I was young"

heidi said...

nathan good work!!! keep writing... God bless ya